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PostSubject: Em~mS Doodle Spot :D   Em~mS Doodle Spot :D EmptySun Jun 05, 2011 5:51 am

Serenity’s Plead

If there is a more powerful being that really does exist,
Beyond this mortal plane of ours;
Please I’d like to ask something of you

Amidst this darkness that had befallen us in this time
Now I stand here before you;
As the testament of his worth

His significance to exist as a human being,
And his right to live in your name,
For him to fight for your just morals;
For righteousness’ sake

I stand here before you;
Asking no more than anything other than his lasting redemption,
But I am not asking this for my sake alone,
I‘m asking this in behalf of all the people who still believes in him;
Hoping that one day, he’ll bring back the fading light into this world

Please, let me be the Embodiment of his salvation;
For he has suffered long enough,
And had endured much ache

I beg of your unending enlightenment,
Please let him pass your gates of eternal penance;
Give him everlasting peace,
Let him have the one thing that he has been longing for all his life;
May his soul be at ease once and for all

This I ask you with all my heart;
And from the very depths of my pleading soul

This is my only wish,
My simple prayer

Amen
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Limitless Bounds

Don’t feel despaired,
Do not fret on the fragility of one’s existence;
For we live under one limitless sky…

We are bound to undertake some trials;
Though some may be easy to surmount…
There maybe a few pitfalls that may lead you down to the bottom;
That might push you near the edge of reason…

But don’t loose sight on hope;
Learn to stand up after your fall,
Keep those dreams of existence alive within you…

For I will be watching you,
Praying that you will always be safe…
Though your journey must be unendurable;
I know that you will still go on; no matter what the odds may be…
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My for Longing Solitude

“Do not stand there and weep for me,
I am still here; I haven’t deserted you in your dimmest hours…
For I am the thousand winds which blows on the jade colored meadows that we created together,
and the shining diamond glints on your frigid snow of tears...
I am the sun that shines on the ripened grain on our golden fields of existence;
as well as the soothing, calm rain that gives you tranquility on your forlorn seclusion…”

“I am the sweet, affectionate sunshine that stirs you up in the morning hush;
For I give you a swift, uplifting rush…
Like the hushed birds that fly in their circled flight up above in the infinite blue skies...
I am the far-flung, radiant star that brightly shines on your darkest nights,
So do not stand there and weep for me;
For I am always here; forever standing by your side…”
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Blood Oath

I pledge this oath by your name;
That I will be always and forever in your lifelong debt…
My dearly beloved…

For I vow never to abandon you…
In the face of this uncertain aridity;
Whatever it maybe,
No matter how hopeless it could get;
How hard it may seem…

I will be always here,
Regardless of the distance that keeps us apart…
Remember that I will always be here to protect you,
Even if all the odds may seem against us;
I’ll be your shield against all the hurt that may come…
Even if this means sacrificing my very existence….

This I swear to you with all my life;
Until my very last breath,
That you alone can take away…
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~Note these following poems are still tentative they may or may not appear on the final draft... thanks Very Happy
~and also the last poem is somewhat adapted and modified I have some doubts putting it on the novel coz of copyright issues, but nevetheless I also felt that I have to share this poem with you guys... bounce bounce


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PostSubject: Proses and Poems that are Included on the Draft   Em~mS Doodle Spot :D EmptySun Jun 05, 2011 6:04 am

Chapter One:
“The Seeds of Fate…”


“Living in the Darkness, amidst the light;
And suffering for Eternity in exchange for Death..."


For six thousand years I am silently watching the world pass by,
Humanity has long since changed…
Most of them had already forgotten;
The lessons of their existence…

What pitiful beings they are…
They do not understand the forces that exists outside their own realm,
Man never really knew how to toil with reality,
That’s why they always end up dead;
Or maybe I just see myself in them…

Death…
One of the few privileges that a mortal has,
The one thing that I want to experience…
But I bear the curse of the undying;
For because of my treachery to my own race…

Now I exist in eternal suffering…
Forever forsaken into this realm,
Never to escape this curse that I bear;
Perhaps, until the end of time itself…

~Story Proper~

My past…
Is now catching on to me,
I never knew that it would hunt me this way…

For centuries I had existed without remorse;
I had senselessly innocent blood,
Without clear reason,
Now they are up to me…

Is this what they call guilt..?
Am I becoming frail?
Indeed I had mingled for so long,
But there are so many things yet for me to understand,
So much to be revealed…


“Once again blood has stained hands;
I took up arms as I wreak death upon my own Brethren..."

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Chapter Two:
“Lurking Shadow
s…”

“She is nothing more but a distant remnant of my past;
Nevertheless, she’ll always come back hunt me…”

Have you forgotten…?
Have you forgotten your vow…?
Renullius…?
Have you forgotten me…?

Renullius,
Do not let me be forgotten…
Forgotten in time,
Forever lost in your memories…

Those nine hundred years…”
Will all be wasted;
And will be forgotten…

Renullius…
Remember me,
Remember your vow…

~Story Proper~

IIs this all real…?
Am I really seeing your other side?
“Ren…”

Are you really the Demon that this realm once feared…?
Or Am I seeing a man,
Who fights to affirm his existence…?

Renullius…
Which of these persons is the real you…?
I-I am confused, of what you are…

I want to know,
I want to understand your sorrow…
“Ren…”
I want to know you more,
Of whom you are…

Beyond this demon in front of me,
To the human that exists,
buried deep inside of you…


"One cannot stop the wheel of Faith from vigorously turning; and so as the series of events that are bound to unfold on the Path of one’s Journey..."

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Chapter Three:
Eternity’s Sanctum"


I had forsaken much, without reason…
I drove myself to the edge without a clear view…
And yet I am still here…
I still exist amidst it all;
The chaos, confusion, apathy, and the grief in this world…

Despite it all;
I still live by this guilt…
The guilt to myself,
To my brethren,
And especially to her…

I have lived for so long…
With this burden;
I’m so tired…
I just couldn’t take it anymore…

My search for redemption;
Is it the only way to justify my existence…?
Is it..?

This unending insignificance;
That clouds my soul…
It devours my very essence;
Slowly I am withering inside…

I can’t feel myself anymore…
Am I dying..?
Or am I just becoming deathly numb...?
Numb to all these things…

To the joy and sorrow,
In life and even in death;
To subsist without sentiment,
Even the slightest remorse…

All the pain and the anguish,
I can no longer interpret these things…
Am I no longer alive..?
Nor I feel dead…

~Story Proper~

No…Don’t cry, Irish…
Do not shed tears for me,
Y-your tears aren’t worth it…
I-I am not worthy of anything,
Even your empathy; I don’t deserve you…

I-I have to die this way,
I have to pay for my sins…

For all those blood,
which stained these hands…
This is their price;
They want to take my existence…

No! Don’t say that, Ghyst!!
Don’t you dare tell me those words!!
I am the one who’s not worthy!!!

You’ve sacrificed everything…
You already did so much,
Just to protect me…

Now it’s time for me to do something,
To pay you back…
For everything that you’ve done,
It’s time for me to do something in return,
To save your life…

This is the only way I know…
It’s my choice,
So don’t blame yourself…
I-I’m sorry, but I have to do this…


“As the saying goes; like the rest of the World, Time does not wait for anyone or anything if you’re left behind,
you will be forever lost bound to the moment that has already passed by..."

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Note: this are the collection of poems and proses that I'm planning to put on my novel Very Happy


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PostSubject: Sneak Peak: The Prelude Story :D   Em~mS Doodle Spot :D EmptySun Jun 05, 2011 6:07 am

The Prelude Chapters
“Ad DesinoConfusio…”
("The Undaunted Chaos")


“I write this unrelenting ode to this mislaid infinity of mine;
A perpetual rhyme of my forever silenced soul,
Engraved these words of pain and agony as if they were my own;
And utter them without the slightest uncertainty in my forsaken heart within this obscurity,
As they stand testament to my existence…”

“These words are forever etched on my mind; since that very day that I had thrown away everything in exchange for long faded
Glory that I once sought..."

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On some Unknown place on the Human realm…

“An armor-clad figure stares near the edge of the cliffs over looking a wide plain; when he suddenly turns his attention behind him, where he felt another presence that had just shown up…”

“Young Lord, what brings you here..?”
The Old Demon noble inquires at the younger…
“Am I here to oversee the construction of the Grand Temple Nal‘zaar… Do you have a problem with that, Ascov..?”
The young noble replies with somewhat unreceptive tones…
“No my Lord; it’s just that it is unusual for the Demonic Enclave to send the Noble heir to Throne of Hell, for a meager task such as this…”
Presumes Ascov; trying to justify his earlier remarks…

“This is my personal choice to be here; after all, this entire realm will be my new seat of power; shortly after I take the throne…”
The young noble sanctifies himself; with the slightest angst of arrogance…
“You’re time of Ascension is at hand my Lord; it’s only a matter of time before the Demon Lord Alzairis yields to your rule…”
Adds Ascov, as if he tries to appease the young noble…
“Perhaps, we will only be waiting for that time to come; we’ll never know….”
The young noble further retorts with a bit of sadistic grin…

“The two shadowy figures stood there as they both admire the grandeur of the massive structure that was being built on the plains just beneath them…”
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Meanwhile on an isolated part of the plain…

“A Celestial Maiden dares to venture out on to human realm knowing that there are many dangers looming…”

“It is truly a squander, to see a place such as this; situated on a dreadful realm…”
A lone maiden lies in awe in the middle of the meadow full of flowers; when she’s suddenly been startled…
“Who goes there?!
She orders to the unseen individual; as she prepares to draw her weapon…
“I beg you a thousand pardons my lady, I do not wish to distress you in your respite….”
Implores the anxious person as he comes into view…
“So there are still some liberated mortals left in this realm after all…”
As she was obviously astonished by her discovery…
“I..Is there something wrong my lady, you look fraught..?”
Asked the bewildered mortal…
“I-I was just taken aback by what you’ve said; I thought that the Demon overlords have complete domination over this realm…”
The maiden replies…
“It seems that you are not from this from realm and neither you’re a Demon…”
Presumes the nosy mortal…

“Yes you’re presumption is right mortal; I am of Celestial origin…”
The maiden corroborates the mortal’s conjecture…
“That weapon…Isn’t that spear known as the Wraith of Gaiea..?”
The mortal further inquires at the maiden in trepidation…
“True, this is the weapon I wield in battle…”
The she answer’s with a bit of amusement at mortal’s query…

“Then you must be--!!”
When the he was interrupted by an archangel who appeared near by…*

“My apology to you, mistress; but the Celestial council needs to confer with you regarding a dire situation…”
The Archangel bows solemnly in front of maiden…*
“Very well, I had a very quaint time with you mortal; I hope our paths will cross again in due time…”
As the maiden bids farewell to the mortal…

“Wait, can I know the fair lady’s name?!
The mortal attempts to be acquainted with the maiden for one last time…
“I am known as Ledeia Vaelared; Valkyrie Praetor of the Celestial legions…And you are?”
She answers with glee back at the mortal…
“I am Cornelius De La Rheeze my lady; I am truly honored to have met such a great and beautiful warrior such as yourself…”
The mortal declares with all admiration for the maiden…
“I can say the same for you, mortal; farewell for now…”
Ledeia returns the latter’s adulation…

Then the two Archangels disappeared into the midst of the open fields; leaving the mortal all alone…*
“Lady Ledeia Vaelared; I’ll always remember that name, because our paths will surely cross someday…”
Cornelius pompously said to himself as he picks up something...
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On the Lands of Valhalla; the Celestial Realm…

“As the two Archangels return to the Celestial Realm; while they pass the Great Silver Gates of Valhalla…”

“Mistress may you forgive me if I have to ask you this question…”
The Archangel posed a question at the Valkyrie Praetor…
“Is it about the mortal, Galryv?”
Ledeia responds as she has anticipated the question coming…
“I think that mortal has other motives on befriending you, my Mistress…
Galryv states his doubts…
“I sense nothing of his ulterior motives; if indeed he has one…”
Ledeia answered back without the slightest doubt…
“But mistress he maybe acting as a spy for the Demon Lords in order to catch us off guard…
Counters Galryv; as he tries to defend his insights against Ledeia…

Ledeia stops halfway upon entering the gates and sneers at Galryv…*
“Weather that mortal may or may not be an agent for the dark ones is most improbable for now!! For he seems quite interesting…”
As Ledeia says the final words the argument…
“Are you planning on something, mistress..?”
Curiously asks Galryv…
“I’ll play with the mortal’s game for a little then we’ll see what to do with him afterwards…”
Ledeia cunningly asserts her willingness towards the challenge…
“As you wish…Mistress”
Galryv withdraws his earlier apprehensions; and formally closes the discussion…
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Meanwhile at the Izen Manor…

“After the brief encounter with a Celestial Maiden; Cornelius finally decides to come home only to face his father’s anger…”

“Cornelius my brother, where have you been..?”
A female voice resounds from afar…
“There’s nothing to worry about my dear sister; I have been just strolling around the vast expanse of these plains…”
Cornelius replies in a rather carefree tone to his sister’s worrisome question…
“But brother, Father has been worried sick since you’ve disappeared earlier this morning…”
Cornelius’ sister further adds…

“Amelia has you’re insolent older brother already returned..?”
A much deeper voice came just behind Cornelius’ sister…
“Fa-father!!”
Cornelius stutters upon the sight of his father…
“So where have you been, you little fool..?”
Lord Adelfous De La Rheeze snarls at his son…
“I’ve gone strolling into meadows, Father; and you won’t believe what I’ve just seen…”
Enthusiastically said Cornelius…
“And what is it you saw that will make me interested on such a paltry saunter..?”
Said Lord De La Rheeze in dismay…
“Father, I saw a Celestial Maiden wandering on an isolated meadow not far from here…”
Gleefully said Cornelius…

“Do not treat me for a fool lad; for I am your Father!!”
Furiously retorts the older noble at the young man…
“But Father the Celestial Realm is not a myth; it really does exist!”
Cornelius still persists on his contradiction…
“I have enough of this nonsense!! Go to your quarters and contemplate on what you did!”
As Lord De La Rheeze grew angrier at Cornelius…
“If you won’t believe me; so be it!!”
Cornelius answers back annoyingly…

And just as Cornelius was going to his quarters something fell from his belt…*
“Father isn’t this..!”
Amelia sounded rather shocked when she picked it up…
“A Light Feather?! But how did..?
Lord Adelfous De La Rheeze froze at his feet when he saw the object that fell from Cornelius’s clothing…
“Then brother was telling the truth all along…”
Amelia states her thoughts…
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At the Arcanum; sometime latter…

“You called for me Great Elders..?”
Ledeia bows with respect to the Council members…
“Ah Mistress Ledeia something has just arisen that requires your utmost attention…”
Said one of the Elders…
“Is it too dire, that you summoned me here first rather than the Templar Praetor Kae..?”
Affrontingly asks the Valkyrie Praetor…
“Unfortunately the Templar Praetor is away; she has an important undertaking at hand…”
Answered another one of the Elders…

“But I feel that it would be best if the Templar Praetor will know of this first; wise Elders…”
Ledeia replies as if she’s not commendable of assuming such a position…
“However as of now we do not have pleasure of the time, for Lord Chronos senses something amiss regarding the Demon’s intentions…” One of the Elders sounds distraught…

“Indeed, I sensed a sudden disturbance on the Realm of the Mortals on my brief stay over there…”
Anxiously said Ledeia…
“It seems that the Demons are poised to lay siege to our glorious Realm…”
Answered one of the Elders…

“This situation cannot be left unimpeded; I will take it upon myself for the time being to stand guard against the Demon’s coherent actions… “
As Ledeia declares her willingness to defend her Realm…
“Time is as of the essence, young Praetor; make haste on your approach against the dark ones…”
Warned one of the Elders…
“I am well aware of the Demons’ cunningness; I will take heed on preparing our immanent moves against them…”
Ledeia shows some caution on her judgments…
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Then, Back at the Izen Manor…

“May I enter, my dear brother..?”
Amelia cautiously knocks at the door; as she waits for his brother’s consent…
“What do you want from me sister..?”
Answered Cornelius; obviously still sounding upset from what happened earlier…
“Came here, because I thought you may want this back…”
Amelia hands out the Light feather back to his brother…*

“Then you believed me, Sister..?”
Asks Cornelius; with the glare of hope in his eyes…
“Am I still not that convincing to you big brother..!?”
Amelia lightheartedly teased her brother…

“Err well, what I mean is did both you and father believe me now?”
Ecstatically queries Cornelius at his younger sister…
“That I do not know brother, for our father; for Lord Adelfous De La Rheeze never admits his mistakes…”
Declares Amelia as she answers her older brother’s inquiry…
“That thick headed old man!! He’s such a narrow thinker!”
Furiously retorts Cornelius…

“Cornelius you shouldn’t say such things at father…”
Cautions Amelia seeing that it might lead to the deepening of the tensions between two…
“But he’s acting way too immature for his age!!”
Cornelius still lashes out his anger at his sister…
“The point still stands my dear brother; that old man you’re talking about is still our Father…”
As Amelia tries to calmly explains their Father’s stand…
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*To be Continued...* Very Happy
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Em~mS Doodle Spot :D IrishClainesm
~_~ It's my first Upload for the Character illustrations, Her name's Irish Claine, one of my lead female characters (not exactly the main protagonists) for my novel...

Irish Elynhr-Claine
Age: 20 years of age
Birth date: January 17
Birth place: Belfast, Ireland
Occupation: Journalist for the I.N.B. (The International News Bureau; based on New York City)
Weapon: Mulciber’s Blade [Dagger]

A brief Description about Herself:
At first, Irish only see’s "Renullius" as a mere “material” for her article for the I.N.B. but as she slowly uncovers the truth about him; She became very much attracted to him besides from the very fact that Renullius hides so many secrets after what seems like eternity, and the human that exists amidst the Demon that he is, and he tends to carry this “curtain guilt" within him… She cares for him so much that she is willing to risk it all; even her carrer in order help him in any way she can…
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Note: I think I over did the legs... bounce bounce bounce
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Em~mS Doodle Spot :D Ren
(He's my bad ass male lead character for my novel... Razz)

Renullius “Oblivion” Vohn Ghyst
Age: more than 6000 years old (But he somewhat looks like 27 years of age…)
Birth date: Unknown
Birth place: On the Adustum Aeternus
Occupation: Bounty Hunter (as of the present time…)
Weapon: Venhyr (Veneration), and Necryss (Death) [Dual wield Pistols]

A brief Description about Himself:
Although Renullius had lived for more than Six Thousand years… He tends to shun away even from his brethren, he values his seclusion and privacy very much… He also carries a seemingly heavy burden despite his seemingly invicible stature; which distrurbd him pretty much… And yet despite his treatchry Renullius still hopes that one day he will gloriously return to the realm that exiled him onto the mortal realm…
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Note: this an quite old draft of him; soon to be updated tho... lotsa proportional errors x.X


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PostSubject: Re: Em~mS Doodle Spot :D   Em~mS Doodle Spot :D EmptySun Jun 05, 2011 7:41 am

Very interesting spa... er....draft Very Happy Beside I'v read just the first half Razz But I promise that I'll finish it in these next few days Very Happy

Have you ever though about make a blog where post your draft?
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PostSubject: Re: Em~mS Doodle Spot :D   Em~mS Doodle Spot :D EmptySun Jun 05, 2011 8:07 am

Ciriola wrote:
Very interesting spa... er....draft Very Happy Beside I'v read just the first half Razz But I promise that I'll finish it in these next few days Very Happy

Have you ever though about make a blog where post your draft?

Actually I've tried making one in the past... Since the entire thing is still largely at conceptual stage; I'm not sure if I can gather enough material for a full blown blog~
and up to this moment I'm not sure of what to do next... Thats why I'm gathering feedbacks coz I somewhat lack the confidence to release them to a wider reader base Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Em~mS Doodle Spot :D   Em~mS Doodle Spot :D EmptyTue Jun 07, 2011 5:02 am

Very good may, It'll be interesting to see how it develops. Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Em~mS Doodle Spot :D   Em~mS Doodle Spot :D EmptyTue Jun 07, 2011 4:06 pm

Cute character, I love the drawing! You're also a very good writer, you should publish it somewhere Smile And I agree with Steve, it will be interesting to see how it works out.
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PostSubject: Re: Em~mS Doodle Spot :D   Em~mS Doodle Spot :D EmptyTue Jun 07, 2011 9:04 pm

very interesting draft(: also, I like Your drawing style, it rocks. Very Happy
I might keep reading it Wink

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Blood Oath

I pledge this oath by your name;
That I will be always and forever in your lifelong debt…
My dearly beloved…

For I vow never to abandon you…
In the face of this uncertain aridity;
Whatever it may be,
No matter how hopeless it could get;
How hard it may seem…

I will be always here,
Regardless of the distance that keeps us apart…
Remember that I will always be here to protect you,
Even if all the odds may seem against us;
I’ll be your shield against all the hurt that may come…
Even if this means sacrificing my very existence….

This I swear to you with all my life;
Until my very last breath,
That you alone can take away…

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~A somewhat melodramatic poem; soon to be added to my novel... comming up with version 2 next
*Update* I realized that I had just made my wedding vows thru this poem... x.X


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@May: chapeau!

Very passionate Wink
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My for Longing Solitude

“Do not stand there and weep for me,
I am still here; I haven’t deserted you in your dimmest hours…
For I am the thousand winds which blows on the jade colored meadows that we created together,
and the shining diamond glints on your frigid snow of tears...
I am the sun that shines on the ripened grain on our golden fields of existence;
as well as the soothing, calm rain that gives you tranquility on your forlorn seclusion…”

“I am the sweet, affectionate sunshine that stirs you up in the morning hush;
For I give you a swift, uplifting rush…
Like the hushed birds that fly in their circled flight up above in the infinite blue skies...
I am the far-flung, radiant star that brightly shines on your darkest nights,
So do not stand there and weep for me;
For I am always here; forever standing by your side…”

Anonymous
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Note: Unlike the rest of my Poems; this one is somewhat adapted... Tho I need a bit of help identifying the original author...
(The Original copy was corrupted some years ago T_T)

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PostSubject: Sample Fight scene...   Em~mS Doodle Spot :D EmptyMon Jun 27, 2011 5:30 am

“After traveling for some days, the Mysterious man decides to take a rest; but an unexpected encounter soon follows…”

“Something’s not right here; I sense Auric Emanations…”
The mysterious man sensed something at miss as lights up his cigarette…
“We need flesh; we need warm flesh…”
A Zombie suddenly lunged towards the mysterious man…
“Damn it! Where did they all come from?”
The mysterious man staggered as he quickly draws out his sword…

“Let’s see what the son of Valreigh is capable of…”
A Mysterious voice rang out…
“I just as I thought; they were just mere puppets…”
The mysterious man mocks at his invisible adversary; as he makes short work of his minions…
“My master’s predictions were true; you still posses the skills that he seeks…”
The Mysterious voice adds…

“Show yourself Demon!!”
The mysterious man again confronts his unseen adversary…
“I am Death, one of the four Horsemen of the Apocalypse…”
The Demon finally reveals himself; clad in armor, covered with a seemingly infinite cloak and wields a great scythe…
“So are you here to finish me, Demon..?”
The mysterious man grinned …

“No! I am only to test your prowess, my Young Lord…”
The demon reveals his intent…
“Indeed, you have to see it for yourself Demon…”
Then the mysterious man charges towards his adversary with all his fury…
“Then so be it, I shall test your mettle myself…”
The Demon gladly accepts the mysterious man’s challenge…*

“You put up quite a fight, Young Lord…”
The Death lauded…
“And so are you horseman…”
The mysterious man retorted…
“I see time hasn’t blunted your senses…”
Death added as they continue exchanging blows…

“I am not that weak as you think I am, Demon…”
mysterious man sounds a little affronted, as then drove his blade on to his off guarded adversary...
“Tch! Argg!!”
The Demon wailed in pain as he felt the pierced him, and is brought to the ground…
“Well, well, well, you seemed surprised, Demon?”
Smirked the mysterious man…


“It’s impossible you c-couldn’t have~?!”
Death said with disbelief with the sudden turn of events…
“Now tell me who sent you here!? And what is your purpose?!!”
The Mysterious Man questioned, as he draws out his pistol with some strange inscriptions on it…
“I have already told you my task is to only test you, my young lord…”
Death still stands resolute upon the nature of his task…

“Then so be it demon…”
The Mysterious man snapped, as he lost his patience…
“I can never betray my master’s trust!!”
Death avows, still loyal to his master to the very end…
“Now die insolent fool!!”
Snarls the mysterious man as he set to pull the trigger…

“RenulliusVohn Ghyst, son of Valreigh; the Seed of Fate…”
Another voice rang out at the last moment …
“W-who are you!!? Why do you know my name?!”
The Mysterious man staggered as then hesitated to pull the trigger…
“It is me my child; the great time keeper of hell, Tempus…”
The being introduced himself, as he appeared…

“Master, you don’t have to do this…”
Death pleaded…
“Death, you had served your purpose well, you may go now…”
Tempus said as he drew out the blade from Death’s wound and healed him…
“As you wish my lord…”
Death abided his mater’s wishes and disappeared…
“Now we could talk now, my child…”
Implored Tempus as he returned the blade to agitated looking man…

“So what do want with me now, Tempus?”
Renult responds with a mix of apprehension and uneasiness; as he holsters his weapons…
“The time of your Redemption is near…”
Tempus foretold; after brief moment of silence…
“W-what do you mean by that..?”
Renult posed, perplexed…

“But you must protect the light that guards your path or you will be forever bound in shackles of unending darkness…”
Tempus continued to speak in conundrum…
“Then where could I find this light that you speak of..?”
Renult asks again, still baffled by the foretelling…
“You cannot find the light if you’ll search for it my child; but nevertheless, it will find you; in time…
Tempus replied with another riddle, and then he looks right into Renult’s eye as he slowly vanish…

“Wait! Tempus, where are you going?! You still haven’t answered my question!!”
Renult totters, as he tried in vain to stop Tempus from leaving….
“Even I my child, the Demon time keeper cannot foretell when that time comes…”
Tempus leaves a final omen before completely vanishing…

“My light? The key to my Redemption?! Ha, the Great Time Keeper must be out of mind…”
Renult grimaced; as he dismissed Tempus’ predictions with disdain and lights another cigarette…
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Need additional input on the following scenes...* ^_^
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